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Home » Blogs » Osiris Brackhaus's blog

Story Structure - a different approach

Lately, I was asked where the name of my blog here on the site (catharsis) stems from.

While explaining, realized that what I had been taught at school and had assumed to be a common version is apparently rather rare. But I think this ‘different approach’ is quite useful for anyone working with stories. And after seeing the other blog posts here dealing with writing basics, I thought it might be an interesting essay, too, if only as a starting point for a discussion about what constitutes a technically good story.

Probably everyone knows the usual ‘beginning, middle, end’ formula for a story.

But what about stories that start with the end, like the movie Titanic? Are there stories that work with an ‘end, beginning, middle, end, end’ structure? I personally always found it hard to pin this logic on any given story.

The version I have been taught at school (and probably have changed slightly over the years), takes another point of view for structuring a story. Instead of looking at the story itself, it looks at the audience, or more specifically, at what the audience needs to perceive a story as complete and ‘good’.

The story structure I have been taught assumes that every story needs the following parts:

1) Sympathy
2) Crisis
3) Catharsis
4) Silence

In short, the parts are explained by the function they serve for the relationship between the audience and the hero of the story.

In Sympathy, the audience gets to know the hero and to feel sympathetic with him.
In Crisis, the audience learns of the hero’s predicament that is at the core of this story, of the forces that work against him and his struggle to resolve it.
In Catharsis, the audience watches the hero resolve the crisis.
In Silence, the audience gets time to learn of the results of Catharsis and close the story in their minds before being allowed back into ‘real life’.

Most useful for me, though, is the reverse of these definitions to check if my story has a proper ‘hero’, and isn’t just a bunch of events happening.

Have a look:

The hero of the story is the person (couple, group, item, whatever) that
- the audience get to know in Sympathy
- has a problem in Crisis
- solves the problem in Catharsis
- gathers the fruit of his labor and says good bye in Silence

So if the main character of the story doesn’t check those boxes in the given order, I assume that there’s still something off with my story. At least, that is the case until I can pinpoint why I take another approach specifically in this case.

What do you think?

Is this a story structure theory that works for you?
Do you know stories that do not fit into this pattern and yet work perfectly fine?
Any additions, challenges and/or questions?

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#1 I think that there's a

Submitted by Lon Sarver on Wed, 04/04/2012 - 3:51pm

I think that there's a difference between the emotional storyline and the plot-as-sequence-of-events. The sympathy-crisis-catharsis-silence model is a good way of describing how the ups and downs of the story's emotional beats, regardless of in what order the events of the story are related.

Titanic, for example, builds sympathy by starting (long) after the sinking, hooking the audience by charming Old Rose, and then carrying that emotional investment on into Young Rose when they start relating the events from the beginning.

So it doesn't matter if you tell the story's events in Friday-Wednesday-Monday-Tuesday-Thursday order, so long as the emotional structure of sympathy-crisis-catharsis-silence is maintained.


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#2 A few of my favorite HPL start-with-the-end story beginnings

Submitted by Konrad Hartmann on Sun, 04/08/2012 - 8:58am

Three HP Lovecraft story beginnings:

"It is true that I have sent six bullets through the head of my best friend, and yet I hope to shew by this statement that I am not his murderer. At first I shall be called a madman—madder than the man I shot in his cell at the Arkham Sanitarium. Later some of my readers will weigh each statement, correlate it with the known facts, and ask themselves how I could have believed otherwise than as I did after facing the evidence of that horror—that thing on the doorstep."

-The Thing on the Doorstep

"Cautious investigators will hesitate to challenge the common belief that Robert Blake was killed by lightning, or by some profound nervous shock derived from an electrical discharge. It is true that the window he faced was unbroken, but Nature has shewn herself capable of many freakish performances..."

-The Haunter of the Dark

"After twenty-two years of nightmare and terror, saved only by a desperate conviction of the mythical source of certain impressions, I am unwilling to vouch for the truth of that which I think I found in Western Australia on the night of July 17–18, 1935. There is reason to hope that my experience was wholly or partly an hallucination—for which, indeed, abundant causes existed. And yet, its realism was so hideous that I sometimes find hope impossible..."

-The Shadow Out of Time


Did any of his stories not start with the end?

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#3 One of my favorite stories

Submitted by E.E. Grey on Wed, 04/04/2012 - 10:00pm

One of my favorite stories I've ever written went something like: Middle, beginning, middle, beginning, middle, middle, middle, end. I think structure is however you want it to be as long as, as you said, all the necessary things are there somewhere. It's just nice to take a break from the expected sometimes and surprise the readers, make them guess exactly where you're starting and let them see the build-up later on and figure it out on their own.

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#4 I had never heard this

Submitted by Dan70051 on Tue, 04/17/2012 - 6:02pm

I had never heard this before.  I think it's a great way to address variant forms of writing, especially the checklist you posted.  It's really a useful was to think about things.

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