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Right Message, Wrong Man - Excerpt, Content Labels, Reviews & Discussion

Right Message, Wrong Man
by Annabeth Leong

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The sensible thing to do would be to explain my mistake and hope we could both move on from the embarrassment. But what then? He’d just confirmed his interest and sent a lewd text back to me. I’d seen how Jaron reacted when he thought he’d been hung out to dry. Hell, he got mad the time I asked if he wanted coffee and then forgot to go out and get it. How much worse would it be if I offered him a blow job and then made him feel like a fool?

I lifted the phone and made a few attempts to write an explanation. So sorry. That text was meant for this guy I’m seeing, whose name is a lot like yours. I can’t believe I did that. I deleted it. You will not believe how similar your name is to this guy I’m seeing... I deleted that one, too.

Wishing I could throw the phone, I looked at his texts again. Nothing could possibly be a suitable response to his line about his cock and my mouth and the alley out back—especially not after my line about wanting to get his big cock down my throat. I tried one last message. Yes, I typed. I can be there in 45. My heart pounded as my finger hovered over the send key.

I tried to talk myself out of it. Was giving my boss a blow job in an alley really less humiliating than explaining my stupid texting mistake? The boss who made me miserable every single day at work with his unreasonable demands and total lack of empathy? I pictured his unsympathetic, ex-marine face, his hands like iron around the back of my head, his cock driving down my throat harder than I’d ever had it. But the image wasn’t unappealing—on the contrary. I couldn’t imagine Jaron accepting anything less than a full deep throat, and the idea was about to make my panties melt. I really did need someone to make me forget all my stress.

The real question, I decided, was whether blowing my boss would be less humiliating than accepting yet another sympathy fuck from a guy who rejected me afresh every time I saw him. And actually, it seemed like it was. The idea of Jaron seemed hotter by the minute. I pushed send and headed for the bus that would take me to his neighborhood.


Editor(s): 
Rylan Hunter
Editor(s): 
Erika L Firanc
Proofreader(s): 
Jae Knight
Cover design: 
D.M. Atkins
Cover design: 
Siolnatine
Cover Art Credit: 

Photos by Duey and Honktownman at Dreamstime.

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#1 "Right Message, Wrong Man"

Submitted by Jae Knight on Mon, 09/17/2012 - 9:47am

"Right Message, Wrong Man" was fun to read, intense, and sexy. I was feeling the main character's mortification and shock and felt incredibly bad for her. But then things took a very interesting turn. Jaron turned out to be a lot more than what he seemed to be. I loved that it hurt him to know it had been the wrong number as it showed a new side of the hard, almost cruel boss he is. They were an intense pair and I was sad to see the story end. I'd love to see how their relationship continues.

Jae Knight: Wickedly Erotic Romance

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#2 Thanks, Jae!

Submitted by Annabeth Leong on Thu, 09/20/2012 - 3:59pm

I really appreciate the review. I'm glad Jaron's vulnerability came through. :)

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